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Black Butterfly


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While visiting the hive, Ocellus' friends stumble across a particular book and Sandbar has to deal with the consequences.

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My parents are nice but they don’t care much for personal belongings and my little brothers are still very young.

I feel it’s necessary to point out that Ocellus only has one brother. The pink one is her sister.

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I didn't notice they specified that in the show, but you are right. Not that changeling genders are set in stone but I changed it since that's easily fixed. Thank you.

This was sweet, no forced shipping, let the cannon ship sail undisturbed. Personally I prefer cannon ships to be left as they are, feels more accurate to the characters. But this story had a perfect reason for Sandbar and Ocelleus to go on a date with out it becoming more.
I do wonder if things have/will change in changeling families, though my personal head cannon always has been any female changeling can lay eggs but the queen lays most, so not all changelings are directly Chrysalis's offspring but a lot are, but it's preference not criticism.

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I'm glad you enjoyed it.

And yeah, it can be debated whether all changelings came from Chrysalis or not. The show hinted at it in Thorax's flashback but that could easily be explained away if one wanted to. I just prefer the idea because it's true to actual changeling lore where all changelings come from a changeling mother.

I honestly expected that, from the setup, this would turn into a typical Sandcellus story. Nice twist though.

Good luck on the contest. I'll be rooting for you.

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In my headcanon, only warriors and praetors are bred from the Queen.

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No problem. I entered too, but I've got your back.

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Well, good luck to you, too! I see you also wrote about Sandbar and Ocellus!

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Thank you.
Unfortunately, the story is already complete.

“And then there’s the last step, the step that seals the deal. If you’re in her bedroom and you can just tell she’s under your spell, there will be this one moment at some point where both of you stand or if you’re lucky lie close to each other and suddenly, neither of you is saying anything. That’s when you do it.”

Dang, Gallus! She's not that kind of 'ling! :twilightoops:

“So how does this work? You’re a family of five and you still get a room all to yourself?” Sandbar wondered as he looked around. He and Ocellus’ other friends lounged on a pink, flurry carpet in the middle of her room.

Flurry Heart, NNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!:raritycry::twilightoops::applecry:
Didn't think that Flurry Heart was big enough to be a rug big enough to accommodate Yona, Sandbar, and Gallus sitting on her pelt.


I think you meant to say "fuzzy" instead of "flurry".

As both a fan and a shipper, I found this to be, absolutely adorable. While the Ocellbar ship is dear to my heart, this characterization of Ocellus seems more accurate than most.

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